Topic: Amazon campaign playtesting
hessenfarmer![]() |
Posted at:
2025-09-16, 22:29 UTC+2.0
as pointed out in the second row Pachiquima is the daughter of Kapiqori not yumallapa I believe. so this should be probably corrected in the first line. ![]() ![]() |
DyingSettler![]() Topic Opener |
Posted at:
2025-09-16, 22:31 UTC+2.0
Good catch, was a copy-paste error, I've corrected it now. ![]() ![]() |
tothxa![]() |
Posted at:
Yesterday 00:34 UTC+2.0
I've finished the scenario and I like the story and the great work you put into it too. I agree with hessenfarmer that you could remove some of the general tutorial texts, even if you target it to be a beginner campaign (like Barbarians). An advisor/friend would indeed be much nicer than the exclamation mark icon, which to me was quite alien to the general style of the game. Also, please make the objective texts (the part that will be shown in the objective menu) short and to the point, only describing the end result, not the actions and steps needed. Those should only be shown in the message box introducing the objective. The instructions for rare tree plantation/cutter should mention that you may have to wait until the worker gets enough experience, and please don't give step-by-step instructions of select/click/select/etc. Some suggestions to help keep the player occupied:
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Eugenia![]() |
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Yesterday 20:38 UTC+2.0
Sounds good, I will work on the Amazons (which probably need to be renamed to Amazonians to avoid confusion) after the Frisian campaign that I do now. One of the characters in the Frisian campaign is an Amazon. I used for her the look of real life Amazon tribes rather than an Inca look. If you prefer the Inca look, please let me know so I change it up for your campaign. https://codeberg.org/eugenia/widelands-paintings/src/branch/main/tests/Linthesilea.jpg Ex-developer, ex-tech-journalist, now an artist and a cat mom of 6. ![]() ![]() |
tothxa![]() |
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Today 00:17 UTC+2.0
I think your painting works both ways. ![]() ![]() |
Ron_of_Nord![]() |
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Today 00:21 UTC+2.0
I agree, but I think a slightly darker skin tone would be better, most of the people I have met in my life The aussies are coming, ya ho! ya ho! ![]() ![]() |
tothxa![]() |
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Today 01:08 UTC+2.0
@DyingSettler re timing: I finished the scenario in 3 hours and 11 minutes (gametime) in a relaxed way, ie. I didn't feel rushed at all. Actually it wasn't clear to me that there was a time limit until I looked at the code, and it wasn't clear from the story that the long delays between messages were supposed to be the scout's trip time. After all, the villages are quite close to each other on the game map. But I have no idea how this could be made clearer to the player. ![]() ![]() |
hessenfarmer![]() |
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Today 09:47 UTC+2.0
well, I must say I like the first amazon picture very much and it is quite near what the monk carvajal described in his diary except that he describes they wore their long black hair in pigtails during combat (@Ron_of_Nord they were explicitly described as light-skinned).
Edited:
Today 09:50 UTC+2.0
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hessenfarmer![]() |
Posted at:
Today 10:17 UTC+2.0
@DyingSettler, ![]() ![]() |
Eugenia![]() |
Posted at:
Today 10:25 UTC+2.0
Thank you for the feedback, I've added more color to her (although it's difficult to do it after the fact with traditional methods, because it messes up the layers underneath, but I think it came out ok -- it's drying now). I will add a robe with some decorations on the rest of the tribe paintings. Ex-developer, ex-tech-journalist, now an artist and a cat mom of 6. ![]() ![]() |